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I feel like a vagabond
a nymph, an apparition
sitting reclined in this backseat of your car

I am a vision, a hallucination
that just appears from time to time
tailcoat, tie, flower in the button
waiting, living, hiding in your backseat

& school suddenly feels like
such an ill fitting place for me to be
Dont belong inside classrooms
behind desks, blackboards, textbooks
& too many things to remember

instead, I feel quite right here
watching people in their own little worlds
drive past in their cars
beeping their horns and speeding to make it through the green light

I sit, looking through the window
trucks cast heavy shadows over me
I am your story teller, I am
your vagabond
dozing in the backseat of your car
watching the trees &  forgetting the time.
©2006-2010 ~bentleyyeltneb
:iconbentleyyeltneb:

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written to be read aloud & with expression.

today i found myself in the backseat of a car, pretending it was my little alcove of a home until you came and found me. Imagination, take that Wordsworth.

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:iconxsweetxblasphemyx:
wow :wow: i like it, such an odd mixture of everyday imagery and things less worldly. i read it out loud and love it, in fact i think i might fave it, oui..x x x

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*******
There's kids playing guns in the street. And one's pointing his tree branch at me. So i put my hands up, i say,
'Enough is enough, if you walk away i'll walk away,' .
And he shot me dead.

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:iconbentleyyeltneb:
oh wow, thankyou very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it :):)

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nagini, are you on acid again?
:iconxsweetxblasphemyx:
i did =)

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*******
There's kids playing guns in the street. And one's pointing his tree branch at me. So i put my hands up, i say,
'Enough is enough, if you walk away i'll walk away,' .
And he shot me dead.

*******

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